The essay automatically garners severe word count penalties for containing only 180 words when the minimum is 250. This indicates the nability of the examinee to carryon a lengthy academic conversation in written form. Perhaps this was caused by limited English vocabulary. Perhaps, he was unfamiliar with the standard 4 paragraph writing format (This only has 3 paragraphs). Whatever the reason, an effort to present an extended discussion in written form is necessary.
I will discuss the both sides
There are only 2 applicable prompts for this topic:
- What is your opinion?
- To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The writer is not using either of the standard prompts. It appears that he either:
- Misunderstood the prompt
- Created his own prompt by accident
Either reason will be enough to fail the test based on an inaccurate response. It can therefore be.said, that there are several major reasons this essay is not going to help the test-taker pass the test.