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TASK 1 - The figures in terms of using water for varied intentions in six regions of the world

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Sep 8, 2022   #1

Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The given charts indicate the figures in terms of using water for varied intentions in six regions of the world. Overall, central Asia was the top of using water for agriculture, while Europe took up a majority of water for industrial use.

When it comes to agricultural use, the figures of Central Asia, SouthEast Asia, South America and Africa accounted for more than half of the whole groups, saying 88%, 81%, 71% and 84%. However, the percentage of these countries occupied a minority of industrial and local purposes . Particularly, the figure of SouthEast Asia mostly doubled that of Central Asia and Africa, while the number of South America doubled that of Central Asia regarding manufacture use. By contrast, there was 19 percent in domestic use of South America, which was twice as much as that of three remaining agricultural nations.

Regarding two industrial countries, their figures took up just over a half and around a half of the whole categories, while the numbers for agriculture intention took up over a third, with the figures being 39% and 32%. Interestingly, these countries occupied a larger percentage of domestic use in comparison with that of agricultural countries, which accounted for a small minority/ a small portion (15% and 13% respectively).
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Sep 9, 2022   #2
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