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"fine for driving through the red signal" - FUNNY STORY


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Jun 6, 2013   #1
Task:Write your funny story. Write 150-180 words. Type your answer into the input box.

My wife Irina was driving me to work that day. She has just received her driver's license. She didn't see the red signal, which prohibits any traffic from proceeding, and drove through the intersection. The State Motor Vehicle Inspectorate stopped her. Ira was very afraid of losing her driver's license on the first day of driving. So she decided to bribe him. She gave him her driver's license with 1000 rubles. He quickly took that banknote and put into his pocket. Suddenly, police officer said: "Ira, you need to pay a fine for driving through the red signal". We both were confused. My wife thought that he knows her because he knows her name. She thought that maybe his child goes to the same school. She asked him about his life, his wife, kids and so on. He was confused. He tried to understand who she was. Then she told him that she had to go and would call him later. You'll never believe this, but he apologized for not recognizing us and gave back our 1000 rubles. When we had got home, I asked Ira whether she knew that police officer. Her answer was: "I can't remember him. But he knows my name, so he must know me." I started rolling on floor laughing. Then I told her that her name was written on the driver's license.

Thank you in advance for helping me!
April April 13 / 148 22  
Jun 6, 2013   #2
She hashad just received her driver's license.

which prohibitsprohibited any traffic from proceeding

Ira was very afraid of losing her driver's license on the first day of driving. Soso she decided to bribe him.

(combine these two sentences)

My wife thought that he knowsknew her because he knowsknew her name.
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592  
Jun 23, 2013   #3
She has just received her driver's license.

She has just got her driving license.

She didn't see the red signal, which prohibits any traffic from proceeding, and drove through the intersection.

.... this comes all of a sudden without any connection to the previous line. Better you re-arrange the flow;
My wife Irina was driving me to work that day who has just got her driving license. On our way at one point, she did not notice the red lights that indicated her to stop proceeding and she drove though the intersection.


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