I learned a lot!
Today, the English spoken club is start at afternoon, with the help of senior schoolmates, we learned al ot English spoken skills, though they are far from enough, Expert that, they also teached us some quotes by famous people, such as"East or west, home is the best". We also learn how to make sentences. For example, when we pronounce the "bee". we can make sentences like we are busy as a bee.
In a word, I learned a lot that I have something to do with spoken English and I will remember that if you want to speak good English, you need to repeat, repeat and repeat all the time.
Hello, Zona. Looking at the essay, there are a lot of grammatical errors that need to be fixed. You could use a helpful tool called Grammarly that will help you correct them. I'm going to point out a couple of them. The english spoken is start at afternoon could be corrected and written as the english speaking club started in the afternoon. We learned al ot english spoken skills could also be written as we learnt a lot of english speaking skills. I hope that helps.
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Hi @Zona
What is the problem or the topic of this essay? What is it for?
If you want to talk about the first day of your English club, then I agree that this is too short. Try to read similar articles on the Internet then try to get the naturalness of the English, and then you can relate the idea in your writing. Indeed your writing needs more grammar check as it is quite confusing.
though they are far from enough good, Expert that (I don't understand this part), they also teached teach us some quotes by famous people, such as"East or (give a space before quotation mark) west, home is the best".