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IELTS Task 1 GT. Formal letter to an newspaper


amal_ahm 1 / -  
Mar 15, 2018   #1
You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong.
Write a letter to editor to inform him about it.
Use following points:
* What is the article about?
* What is the error?
*what you expect an editor to do ?


Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing you to inform you about an error in your "Famous musicians " article of your newspaper. It has been published three days ago .

The article was talking about Michael Prous, who is a close friend and colleague, and his journey in the music world from the beginning of his journey. It also included some personal details about his wife and children and their ambitions in life.

I noticed a mistake the writer did regarding his journey in the music profession. He indicated that he started playing piano at the age of 10, while the truth was he started recognizing notes and studying them at the age of 5. He is a great genius with an intuitive musical sense.

I believe that you will consider my request to edit this information. As you are a popular newspaper and a reference to many new young people, such mistake must be a priority to be fixed.

Looking forward to hearing about the new updates .

Yours faithfully.

Amal Taha


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