The diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams provide information about producing cement from some materials and concrete-making process from cement. Overall, there are four steps to yield cement while to produce concrete need one stage only.
First of all, prepare the equipment and materials to make cement such as, limestone, clay, heat, bags, and grinder. There are tools like crusher, mixer, rotation heater, and grinder. The process is begun with refine the limestone and clay by using crusher. It will produce limestone and clay powder. Then the powder will be mixed by mixer. Afterwards, it let into rotating heater to produce heat materials. Then the matter is crushed by grinder to yield cement. Bags are used to contain the cement.
Cement can be the main material to make concrete. Concrete-making process use other materials with certain measurements like 10 percent of water, 25 percent of sand, 15% of cement, and the high percentage of small stones named gravel as much as 50. Then they are mixed by using concrete mixer. Then, it will result some concrete. 171w
The diagrams provide (the) information..
It will produce limestone and clay powder.
..with certain measurements like(such as) 10 percent of water, (...) as much as 50 (percent) . Then, it will result some concrete for construction .
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... prepare the equipments and materials
There are (several) tools like crusher,...
Afterwards, it let into rotating heater to ...
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... cement from some raw materials and concrete-making processprocess to make concrete from cement. Overall, there are four steps to yield cement while to produce... -> try to find the specific and significant topic for this sentence
First of all, prepare the equipment and materials should be prepared to make cement ...
There are toolsequipments like crusher, mixer, ...
... begun with refinerefining the limestone and clay ...
Afterwards, it let into the rotating heater to ...
... crushed by the grinder to yield cement. Bags are used to contain/cover the cement.
Concrete-making process uses other materials ...
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