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Freetime activities - trying to write an essay for my important examination



tulipgirl 1 / 1  
May 15, 2015   #1
Of all the freetime activities, I like reading books most because it brings me many good aspects. First and foremost, book is a cheap way to get information so I have good chance to widen my knowledge not only in the fields I study but also in other sections in life . Moreover, reading books makes me know better about people around the world and the way they live. Besides, there is no denial that books always help me relax. Whenever I am under pressure, I find a novel to read, many stories in which allow me to temporarily forget all trouble happening in my daily life. Sometimes, before I go to bed, I choose some short fairy tales to read to have a sound sleep. In addition, through romantic and meaningful stories, I can learn how to control my feeling and even learn to be more patient. One more benefit of reading book is that it makes me express words fluently, therefore, I can improve my communication skill better and better. In short, reading books is my main hobby and I will make best use of its advantages to have a happy lifestyle

justivy03 - / 2265  
May 15, 2015   #2
- Of all the free time activities I like doing , I like reading books the most because it brings me many good aspects.

- Besides, there is no denialI can't deny the fact that books always help me relax.

- In short, reading books is my maina hobby that makes a worthwhile time pass by and I will make best use of its advantages to have a happy lifestyle

Tulipgirl, I absolutely agree with you. Reading is one of the best hobby you have to develop, it does not only enhance your vocabulary, believe me it also takes you places. It's one of many motivations I have in writing, traveling and exploring the world at its best.

Reading is one of the best way to learn and expand your horizons and reading leads to writing. There's nothing like reading your own article and have everyone read it as well. I want to share with you some points in writing Tulipgirl;

- paragraph,break your ideas in paragraphs so that your readers can breath and keep reading

- sentence construction and logical order, make sure your ideas are in smooth flow and logical order so your readers understand the idea behind your article and were your story is heading.

- Proof read your article before submitting it as this will tell you if you need to refine it or if it's ready to be submitted

Keep reading and write more.

Cheers!!!
OP tulipgirl 1 / 1  
May 15, 2015   #3
It was very kind of you to help me. Thanks a lot


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