Fulfilling the requirements for raw materials needs sacrifice of the environment

IELTS SUMMARY 1:Environmental Impacts of Logging

The logging industry have an important role for supplies raw materials. But, for fulfill the requirements need to sacrifice the environment or in this case leads to deforestation. Habitat loss, pollution and erosion is the myriad effect of deforestation. This is not only can feel by humans, but also plants, animals and microorganisms lost their ecosystem. For example effect of deforestation to air pollution. The function of the trees is remove pollution in the air. Because of photosyntesis process, trees can produce oxygen from carbondioxide with chemical reaction. In the other word, cutting the trees automatically will effect pollutant airborne. The others effect are damaged aquatic habitats, drought and forest fires because the subsoil cant hold water and release it into the atmosphere. However, keeping the existence fundamental resource it must consider before deforestation for better future.

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