IELTS TASK 1; GDP Growth for 3 different countries

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This bar chart shows the percentages of the GDP growth for three different countries over a period of four years starting in 2007. It is clear that the largest number of the GDP growth was in Japan with around 6,5% by year 2010. In 2008, the rate of GDP increased steadily by just 5% in Ecuador. In addition, there was a significant rise in Tunsia by about 6,4% in 2007, while this percentage went down sharply to 4.5% in 2008. The lowest rate was also in Ecuador in 2009 with approximately 1,2% of GDP.

In Japan, the number of GDP fell dramatically to just under 2% in 2007, but it increased gradually to 5% after two years.
To sum up, the number of GDP went up gradually in Japan, but dropped in both Ecuador and Tunsia.

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6.5% and 6.4%