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The gender distribution of educators in the UK - BAR CHART - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 REPORT



AnnaDao 2 / 2  
Dec 27, 2025   #1
Question: The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.


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The given bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of educators among six distinctive types of UK educational institutions in 2019.

Overall, the proportion of female staffs surpassed that of male counterparts in lower educational levels, while men were more represented in higher education. In particular, a perfect gender balance was seen in college, highlighting the shift from female-preferred to male-preferred settings.

Regarding general education, women accounted for the vast majority of teachers in Nursery/Pre-school with roughly 95%, followed by Primary school educators at 90%, whereas the figures for male teachers were negligible with correspondingly 5% and 10%. In contrast, the gap between Secondary school women and men teaching staff narrowed significantly with the figures standing at 55% and 45%, respectively.

Turning to the higher stages of education, College teaching staff were equally at 50% for both genders. Beyond this educational level, the proportion of male instructors in private training institute held a slight lead at around 55%, closely followed by that of male University lecturers. On the contrary, female lecturers at University made up the smallest proportion of the figures at 40%, which was two-thirds that of their male counterparts.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15970  
2 days ago   #2
The summary overview is too short and does not meet the required sentence requirement. You have to present at least 2 sentences in this paragraph, with 3 being the preferred number. What is lacking is the proper enumeration of sections are provided in the graph. While you did present some of these in the trending statement, you did not provide all of the comparison sections. There only needed to be 2 information presented there, the upward and the downward trend. You incorrectly and in completely discussed the provided sections instead. This would result in a problematic (non passing) TA score for that scoring section.


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