A majority of people claim that the qualities such as honor, trust and kindness are not valuable anymore, as social status and possessions have become an identification of a person.
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A majority of people claim that the qualities such as honor, trust and kindness are not
valuableso worthy anymore, as social status and possessions have become
an identificationmore important criteria that are used to judge the worthiness of a person.
While I admit that in some societies people are too materialistic, I would argue that the traditional values such
assharing and honestyhonor, kindness and trust(align your writing more with the task) have even more impact on a personal worth
iness.One must note that brands like "Armani" or "Mercedes" have become status symbols for many people.
Actually, this is your example for the reason that you used to justify your position on the argument. So tell the reason first and then give the example to support that;
It is quite apparent that lifestyle of modern people define their status in society. For example, the brands like "Armani" or "Mercedes" do attach a certain status to one's profile in society.