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GLOBAL HYBRID VEHICLE SALES during 4 years (from 2006 until 2009)


Lily Potter 2 / 5 1  
Dec 27, 2018   #1

popularity of hybrid transportation among customers


IELTS WRITING TASK 1

The bar chart illustrates the sales of the global hybrid transportation in 3 different countries during 4 years, 2006-2009.

Overall, United State stand as the highest of the number of sales, following by Japan and other countries and the trend sales of Japan and other countries was upward, while United Stated showed fluctuated.

Standing as the highest, United State, In 2007 reached 350.000 sales of hybrid vehicle, while Japan and other countries stayed in below of 100.000. However, in 2009 sales in Japan increased significantly to 330.000 sales and other countries rise sharply up to 110.000, while United States sales decrease to 270.000 sales.

Customers in United Stated tend to allocate their budget to another necessity starting in 2007. This is can be seen the sales of transportation were not steady. United Sales trend was fluctuated, in 2006, the sales was 250.000 and reaching the highest sales was compared to the others then the sales increased in 2007, but declining in 2008 and staying in 280.000. The number of sales of Japan and other nation increased between 2006 and 2009 which, Japan as always higher.

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Sherk 4 / 7 2  
Dec 27, 2018   #2
Japan increased ...
Should be: Japan increased significantly to 330.000 sales compared to United States sales decrease to 270.000 sales, and other countries rise sharply up to 110.000.
OP Lily Potter 2 / 5 1  
Dec 28, 2018   #3
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