A global mobilization is required in order to tackle the Climate Crisis issue

TED Summary : New Thinking On The Climate Crisis

Modern conflic usually occur as global warming must be responded to immediately. Need global mobilization to Worldwide to develop new energy, conservation, efficiency of global transition. One way of finding resources that impact both. The precenter shows some examples in slideshows on the logo or appearance of the earth and has experienced changed from 1980 until now on condition can seem like there are many parts of the sea ice dissapeard. Especially in 2005 was a record for significant changed.

He showed an example of a building in Alaska from the effects of the global. Human activity also became responsible for global warming. It can contribute for changed that issue by modern technology invitation.

Renewable energy is often the best way like bring electricity to places that do not have it. Evolve new resources for sustainable development. Proposes solar energy by example can be used. Another resoureces came from geothermal and shoulders will improve for the future. In addition, Australia has been starting to realize their inhabitant. The final point to remain should be optimistic because it has the opportunity and can be impacted in the future.

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Most of the sentences must be rewritten to sound better (and to make more sense). One of the biggest problems with your text is that there are no smooth transitions between sentences, which makes it little hard following the line of your logic. Ideally, each new sentence must be the continuation of what has been said in the previous one. I rewrote the initial sentences for you to illustrate how this should be done:

Modern conflic [...] It is very likely that as the process of global warming continues to gain a momentum, there will be more and more conflicts taking place on this planet.

Need global [...] This, in turn, requires the mobilization of humanity so that the problem in question could be effectively addressed.

Also, try to keep your sentences shorter until you get a better command of the language. I hope this helped. Regards.