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Should government spend money on highways or public transportation?


Eslam8787 1 / 1  
Mar 6, 2014   #1
Spending money on highways or it's better to spend it on public transportation.
This is one of controversial issues in life. highways are useful for individuals, but
public transportation serves groups of people.

Both point of views are respectable and have acceptable motives. In my opinion,
i prefer spending money on public transportation for the next reasons.

The first reason for my propensity for investing in public transportation
is that it is the most important form of transportation in the city.
By the public transportation system, people who haven't cars or
who haven't the ability to drive can use them for goint to their destinations.
Also childern and students can go easily to their schools
by using the public transportation.

Another benefit of the public transportation is that developing it reduces
the huge volume of traffic. As we see, our streets are full of buses
and private cars. The private cars are usually beneficial
for limited numbers of persons, but buses and all other kinds
of public transportation provide transporting service for a huge number of people.

finally, From what we discussed above developing the public transportation
is more beneficial than developing the highways.
jon_snow 8 / 28 5  
Mar 7, 2014   #2
Don't start your essay by restating the question. Start with a hook, i mean write something general. However hook should not be more than 2 sentences. Then, restate your question and opinion. This should be your intro.

Both point of views are respectable and have acceptable motives. In my opinion,
i prefer spending money on public transportation for the next reasons.

Don't make another para for stating your opinion. Write it in your intro.

Use specific reason to support your body para. This will help you to increase your word count and to write more coherently and comfortably.
OP Eslam8787 1 / 1  
Mar 7, 2014   #3
thanks john_snow
i will enter TOEFL exam and your comments help me alot
also i need to practice for speaking do you know where can i review my recorded paragraphs ??
jon_snow 8 / 28 5  
Mar 7, 2014   #4
about speaking section i m also in perplex. i could not find any suitable site to practice speaking where people will provide comments on my speaking; like this site. However, i am practicing on my own. I record what i say in my phone and listen to it. If it seems to me that there are some mistakes in my speech i take the task again. This is the way i m following now. by the way u can follow notefull free tutorial from youtube. they have some formats on speaking section which i think will be very helpful for anyone. :)

last but not least, please inform me if u find any site or blog where i can practice speaking, it will be very helpful. please do this on any of my writing otherwise it will be heard for me to get the message. :)

wish u all the best :)


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