The graph gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia born in UK

The line chart report

The line chart given denotes the proportion of people settled in Australia who were given birth in Asia, the UK, and other regions.
In general, the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia and other areas saw an upward trend. On the other hand, there was a dramatically fall in the percentage of that people who were born in the UK.

It is worth noticing that the proportion of people who were born in Asia increased rapidly over the years, from 1% in 1976 to 15% in 2011. Meanwhile, the percentage of Australian who were born in other sectors fluctuated. It droped by 3% from 1976 to 1986, after which there was a quickly improvement of 6% in the percentage in 2006. However, this figure could not remain untill 2011, but went into free-fall slightly 2% compared to 2006.

On the contrary, the percentage of people who were born in the UK faced a downward trend, specifically, from 13% , it decreased 8% on a 35-year period, beginning in 1976.

This does not make sense, the people could have been born in Asia, their parents gave birth in Asia, but neither were ever "given birth" in Asia. Incorrect grammar / word usage will result in lowered LR and GRA scores at the very start of the scoring considerations. That is not a good sign. Failing these 2 sections so early in the presentation could result in an overall failing score in the end.


Increase the task accuracy by completing the graph listing of countries. That way it makes it easier for the reader to track the information you will be discussing in the body. They will be on the lookout for further discussion points. Doing so will also increase the TA score of the trending statement based on the summary requirements.


Remember to spellcheck, review, and revise the essay prior to submission. Incorrectly spelled words will be deducted from your LR score and could be a GRA deduction due to confusing word references.

Avoid writing single sentence paragraphs. Technically, that will not be considered a paragraph anyway since a paragraph is always composed of at least 3 words. A single sentence is a statement. It will not return the same scores as a completely developed paragraph.

@Holt
thank you for correcting my mistakes