The graph below gives information on the performance of a train company in October and November

The provided line graphs illustrate the performance of a railway company in terms of trip cancellations and delays during October and November of 2008. Overall, both cancellation and delay percentages showed relatively similar fluctuations throughout the specified timeframe. Notably, October recorded the highest proportion of canceled trips, while November witnessed the peak in delayed trips.

In the initial week of October 2008, 20% of all trains faced delays, a figure that surged by 10% in the subsequent week, only to decrease to 5% by the month's end. Conversely, November started with over half of all trains running behind schedule, with a slight reduction to 40% in the third week.

Regarding cancellations, a mere 1% of all trains were affected in the first week of October. This percentage sharply rose to 7% in the following week, only to decrease by 1% subsequently. The remaining weeks saw cancellation percentages closely mirroring the pattern of delays, ranging from 1% in the first week of November to 4% in the third week.

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When you mention the type of image, it would be best for your score if you immediately include information about the number of line graphs and what these represent. When you do it in the 2nd sentence, it becomes more difficult for the reader to separate the image references in their minds. Always remember, it is understood that the reader will not have access to the image so you must ensure that your summary helps develop the idea clearly in their minds. Failure to do so could affect your GRA score.

The overall presentation is acceptable. Acceptable is not good enough. Try to develop your analysis and reporting presentation by 2 more sentences per paragraph to meet the maximum scoring requirements per paragraph. Show more intellectual ability in your writing task.