The ecotourism concept arise out "green movement" that have meaning to preserve the natural environment. The goals not only avoid harming the environment but also give beneficial for local ecology and society. Ecotourism offers many types of destination like natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in remote area with local resident. Ecotourism look for enviromentally friendly accommodations such us renewable resources and recycling. It also seek out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainly local staff. Ecotourism usually don't use cruise ships because they produce not only a harmfull emmisions but also many tons of garbage and wastewater. The growing of ecotourism interest causes many companies advertise themselves as ecotourism companies although not all the companies practice the principle.The travelers must choose carefully and ensure that the company practice the ecotourism principle. The positive side is that become the indication of ecotourism development.
"green movement" - What is Ecotourism ? (Interesting tourism)
Hi Aris.
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The ecotourism concept arisS out "green movement" that havemeaning AIM to preserve the natural environment. The goals DO not only avoid harming ...
THE Ecotourism offers many types of A destination like THE natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in A remote area with A local resident. THE Ecotourism lookS for enviroNmentally friendly accommodations ...
It also seekS out hotels andtourist companies TOURISMS that hire mainly local staff. THE Ecotourism usually don't DOES NOT (Please, pay attention to contraction in the formal writing. never ever ever do it) use cruise ships because they produce not only a harmfull emmisions EMISSIONS but also many tons ...
The growing AN INCREASE of ecotourism interest (...) themselves as THE ecotourism companies although ...
The travelers must choose (...) the company practiceS the ecotourism principle. The positive side is that TO become the indication ...
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1. Verb Agreement
2. Use of the article.
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4. misspelled words
5. the meaning of the sentences
I really believe you will show the better progress on condition that you wanna provide much time to practice again and again.
keep spirit.
Good luck
These are my corrections to improve your writing.
Please, make you sure to meet my notes in this summary.
The ecotourism concept arisS out "green movement" that have
THE Ecotourism offers many types of A destination like THE natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in A remote area with A local resident. THE Ecotourism lookS for enviroNmentally friendly accommodations ...
It also seekS out hotels and
Note:
Please call your attention to:
1. Verb Agreement
2. Use of the article.
3. never use the contraction in the formal writing.
4. misspelled words
5. the meaning of the sentences
I really believe you will show the better progress on condition that you wanna provide much time to practice again and again.
keep spirit.
Good luck
Hi Aris05.
I hope these corrections help you :)
... environment but also givebeneficialbenefit for local ecology and society.
Ecotourism offers many types ofdestinationdestinations(countable) like natural destination.
... friendly accommodations suchusas renewable resources and recycling.
It alsoseekseeks out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainlymain local staff.
... they produce not only aharmfullharmfulemmisionsemissions but also many tons ...
I hope these corrections help you :)
... environment but also give
Ecotourism offers many types of
... friendly accommodations such
It also
... they produce not only a
there are some similar words that you can use on your next essay, good luck aris.
... "green movement" that have meaning to preservethe natural environment(nature) .
The goals not only avoid harmingtheenvironment Nature but also give ...
... friendly accommodations suchus as renewable resources ...
... they produce not only a harmfull emm isions but also many tons...
... although not all the companies practice the principle/value .
... practice the ecotourism principle/code .
... indication of ecotourism development/improvement .
... "green movement" that have meaning to preserve
The goals not only avoid harming
... friendly accommodations such
... they produce not only a harmful
... although not all the companies practice the principle/value .
... practice the ecotourism principle/code .
... indication of ecotourism development/improvement .
Hay haris, here my corrections hopefully can help you for improve your writing
- but also givebeneficial(benefit) for local ecology and society
- Ecotourism offers many types ofdestination(Destinations) like natural destination
- It alsoseek(seeks) out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainly(main) local staff
- they produce not only aharmfull (harmful) emmisions(emissions) but also many tons of garbage and wastewater
note : more be carefful about your spelling, happy writing!
- but also give
- Ecotourism offers many types of
- It also
- they produce not only a
note : more be carefful about your spelling, happy writing!
Hello there, let me give some correction for you ...
... out "green movement" thathave (has) meaning to preserve ...
... environment but also give beneficial ( benefit) for local ecology and society.
Ecotourism look forenviromentally ( wrong spelling) friendly accommodations such us ...
... that hire mainly local staff.only aharmfull emmisions (harmful emission)
Ecotourism look for (NOUN)enviromentally friendly ( adj+adj, it is fobiden) accommodations such us (as)
... out "green movement" that
... environment but also give beneficial ( benefit) for local ecology and society.
Ecotourism look for
... that hire mainly local staff.only a
Ecotourism look for (NOUN)