IELTS: Greenhouse gases trap energy from the sun

The diagram illustrates how greenhouse gases trap energy from the sun. Greenhouse give affect to atmosphere and earth.

Generally, heating of the earth shows process heat trapped by greenhouse gases. This trapped reflect to atmosphere and partly radiated into space.

Extra CO2 from burning fossil fuel so that heating trapped by greenhouse gases affect heating earth. This.This heating can not absorbed by O2 because felling of trees. Effect of heating in the earth, heat energy radiated into space. This heating partly reflected off atmosphere

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Overall, the greenhouse gases big affect to earth. Atmosphere become thin and heating of earth.

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write more, upinipin..:)

you should be careful toward your words :)

Hello ipinupin,

As mr. eddie said about the sake of this writing


so, you have to give the information based on the prompt. As long as i read your writing you did not present the clear information. Moreover, if you have overview you can omit the conclusion, but you should divide your body paragraph to be two parts.

hello,,how many words you've written here? in IELTS TASK 1 you need to write at least 150 words

this report seems like less than 150 words

double verbs

Greenhouse give affectsto atmosphere and earth negatively.

Greenhouse give affects to atmosphere and earth.
Your detailed body paras are not adequately informing the details of what the diagram presents. They need to contain more details. Follow dumi's approach for the structure of this task.


... this has grammar errors.
Overall, the greenhouse gases affect the earth negatively. They make the atmosphere thinner and heat up the earth severely.