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Group learning or individual learning is better?



ththao_99 5 / 9  
Jul 28, 2019   #1

choice of learning method



Essay topics: Some people believe that students in schools learn better when they study in groups. Others say school students learn better when they study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many believe that group learning will be more effective than individual learning for students, whereas, there is a contradictory notion about the superiority of individual learning. In this essay, will explore both sides of the debate and give my opinion.

To begin with, individual learning enhances the concentration of students. This is because learning alone will prevent pupils from distraction from their teammate's discussion. Especially, to a lot of students who are introverts, it is onerous for them to come up with an idea when they are in crowd. Furthermore, studying by their own will improve the ability of working independently. A group include a lot of students in different levels and some are more talented than others will increase the possibility of develop the habit of just relying on these talented students. When they work alone without support from other, they learn by themselves; hence, their other soft skills like researching, seeking, also improve.

On the other hand, group learning has is own benefits. Several students with different strengths and weaknesses can make up for each other. Specifically, if one person gives an idea and other will develop and nourish it, make it to become the best version of this group by giving their perspectives. Human being usually finds hard to realize their own mistakes so working together is a good way to take improve myself by objective and friendly judgment from teammates. Besides, it will improve teamwork skills of students. Even if you detest working with others but in our modern society, it is unavoidable. Therefore, it will give the students the best preparation for the working environment in the future.

To sum up, two types of learning method have their own pros and cons. In educational environment we can combine these and use them flexibly in particular period of learning as well as in specific students.

Cay nho 3 / 6  
Jul 29, 2019   #2
I agree with you that your opinion should be more clearer
The last sentence in the introduction is not complete
Grammar mistakes : on their own
a group includes, others, developing
Maria - / 1096  
Jul 29, 2019   #3
@ththao_99
Hello there! Welcome to the forum! I'm an active contributor here; and I hope you find all of the feedback helpful for your writing endeavors! We'd be happy if you came back for more. I wish to cover areas that others may have not yet.

First and foremost, while I think that your essay is put-together, I would heavily recommend trying to create more personalized assessments and analyses. Doing this will help you have more depth in your writing.

The lack of concrete (and/or firm) examples is also to be noticed in the text. Some portions lacked substantiation because of this. I recommend focusing on this protion of the text.


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