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Happiness is an emotional or affective state; Causes of Happiness



yumna 2 / 3  
Dec 14, 2012   #1
Happiness
Happiness is an emotional or affective state that can be individual or shared with other people. Each person has own definition of happiness. For example, some people think that happiness comes from having a lot of money, and some think that happiness can come from simple things such having a friend. Happiness can affect your health, the people around you, and it can make you have a positive life. There are three causes of happiness such as being successful, eating chocolate, and being optimistic.

The first cause of happiness is being successful. Successful life can lead to happiness. For instance, if you are a successful student, you are going to be happy. That is because you are going to feel accomplished which is one of the reasons that lead to happiness. Being successful could also mean having good relationships with other. In other words, if you show good manners everywhere you go, you will make people like to have a friendship with you. As a result, you are going to have a relationship with your friends, and friends can be one of the reasons that lead to happiness.

The second cause of happiness is eating chocolate. Eating chocolate can make you be happy .For instance, researcher have found that chocolate has the property of increasing levels of some hormones. These hormones can cause feelings of happiness and well being. Also, the researchers found that eating 40 grams of dark chocolate every day for two weeks can reduce the stress. In other words, the levels of stress hormones will be reduced which can make you feel happy.

The third cause of happiness is being optimistic. Optimism is one of the reasons that lead to happiness. Optimism is a hopefulness and confidence that things will work out. Also, it can help us to move from the past and not fear the future. If you are a pessimist, you are going to think that things will not work out. As a result, the pessimist can lead to less happiness and make you have sadness in your life.

In conclusion, it seems that we have three causes of happiness such being optimistic, eating chocolate and being successful. Happiness is very important to our life because it can make our life meaningful. It can affect our life and the people around us, so people have to be happy and optimistic in order to have a comfortable life.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Dec 14, 2012   #2
Each person has own definition of happiness. For example, some people think that happiness comes from having a lot of money, and some think that happiness can come from simple things such having a friend.

.... Here, the word "definition" is not the most appropriate word. This is how different people perceive happiness. Therefore I suggest;
Each person perceive happiness his own way. For example, some people think it comes with money and luxury. Some believe it is the mental peace that makes one happy.

There are three causes of happiness such as being successful, eating chocolate, and being optimistic.

.... eating chocolate ?... hahaha... you must be a chocolate lover :D
OP yumna 2 / 3  
Dec 14, 2012   #3
Thank you so much :) yes i'm a chocolate lover :D hhhhh
Bikash2013 3 / 11  
Dec 29, 2012   #5
I think that can be individual is not appropriate , so write that can be individually ..
in place of good relationship with other write with others.
a reasearcher has found in place of researcher have found.
it can affect our lives not ouf life.
Other part is good.! nice work.
xxxbluefrogxxx 4 / 13  
Dec 29, 2012   #6
I think the ending is too dull. Add some flavor to the conclusion; it will make it more interesting.

Maybe say how all pessimist could just turn into nerds or eat a bunch of chocolate to turn into a happy person?


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