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[TOEFL] higher education should be available only to good students or not


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Jan 14, 2014   #1
TOPIC : Some people believe that a college or university education should be
available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be
available only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you
agree with? Explain why.


No one can disagree that knowledge is the most important for everyone. College and university are playing in an important role to provide academic skills to people in order to pursue their goal. There are an issue that some people agree that this opportunity should be preserved for good students however there are others people who think that everyone should have this chance to gain these advance skills from college or university. This issue will be discussed.

First of all, many people think that college and university should consider students to study with them only if they are good students. The reason is that studying in advance education take a huge of money. College and university do not want people who not qualify for to waste their money in these expensive courses and waste their time. They believe that only good students have potentials to success programs more that those who are not considered as good students. Consequently, mediocre students are not have a chance to gain these advance knowledge from college and university.

On the other hand, there are some people think that all students should have equal opportunity to study in higher education. Of course, higher education take a lot of money and a lot of time however moderate students should have a chance to try. Everyone that has strongly ambition could pursue and success their goal even they are not classified as a good student because people can change. With a good environment in college or university is encouraging students to study harder for a good future. Thus, mediocre students should have opportunity to be trained in college and university.

In conclusion, I personally agree with that college and university should be available for all students who want to pursue their goal. Students can have opportunity to learn, to practice, to gain more knowledge for their career and for their future. Studying in college and university is a great opportunity that all students should have.
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Jan 14, 2014   #2
No one can disagree that knowledge is the most important wealth for everyone.

College and university are playing in an important role toin providingprovide academic skills to people in order to pursue their goal.

Colleges and universities play an important role in providing students with knowledge and skills in order to help them achieve their academic goals.

There are an issue

.... There is an issue / There are issues

First of all, many people think that college and university should consider students to study with them only if they are good students

Well, you have already introduced the topic in the intro and there's no need in repeating the same in body paras. Start with the reason!


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