The student cannot recieve a passing score for this essay. The discussion response provided does not align itself with the given discussion questions. For clarity:
Questions:WHY? WHO BENEFITS MORE FROM THIS, THE COMMUNITY OR THESE YOUNG PEOPLE.
Response 1: There are many good grounds to explain this trend - Does not directly answer "why?"
Response 2: both the community and young people - Writer must pick only one of the two options for his solid response. Hint: The community encompasses all the members of the group, inclusive of young people.
because of certain reasons
Recap the reasons for the summary conclusion.
I suppose
So you are no longer sure of the validity of your previous response? This is nota good place to suddenly have doubts as it will alter the TA score based on opinion clarity.