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host country ought to support cultural difference; local customs and behaviour


fahadbd 25 / 56 5  
Aug 26, 2013   #1
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Advance technology has enhanced the growth of tourist around the world. It is certainly true that different nation for separated customs, culture and the way of life. Record number of people conjecture, Visitors travel the countries should be entitled to perform self-customs, while others contradict the argument. However, I believe that host country should allow visitors to practice self customs.

Millions of visitors visiting all over the world in where they are sometimes either allowed or disallowed themselves to practice their own culture. People are in different religion whose customs are different. If they are compelled to follow local customs and behaviour by the authority, it means the trigger for conflict among the racial minority. Undoubtedly, visitors sojourn in the country for one to three months for the purpose of entertainment or looking for historical ecology landscape around. Moreover, they are the temporary guest in the country.

Interim travelling to other countries is a source of earning for the government. The host country should let them free to perform their own customs. Facilities will be created for tourists according to their customs and behaviour. For example, masques should be built for Muslims, temple for Christian, as visitors get a new lease of life in the host country. Otherwise, they might create a clash. Some people express views that visitors will practice the local customs, which is often difficult to focus.

In conclusion, I believe that host country ought to support cultural difference. As a result, the number of tourists will inspire to visit the country. They should not be confined under local cultures.

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MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Aug 27, 2013   #2
Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

You should include the question of the prompt.

Advance technology has enhanced the growth of tourist around the world.

This sentence is off-topic.

different nation for separated customs, culture and the way of life.

Different nations have their unique customs, culture and way of life.

Record number of people conjecture,

This is unnecessary.

Visitors travel the countries to other countries
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Sep 15, 2013   #3
Advance technology has enhanced the growth oftouristtourism around the world.

.... very good hook :)

It is certainly true that different nation for separated customs, culture and the way of life.

It is the fact that different nations have their own different customs, beliefs, traditions, cultures and way of life.

Record number of people conjecture,

... this is pretty confusing.... be careful when you use synonyms. Don't use them if you don't know the exact usage of them because they may give very different impressions :(
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Sep 21, 2013   #4
Millions of visitors visiting all over the world in where they are sometimes either allowed or disallowed themselves to practice their own culture.

.... this has grammar issues.
There are millions of travelers who travel around the world. However, not every country allows travelers to practice their own traditions or religious beliefs.
Now give an example for this situation;
For example, a strong Catholic traveler who attends the mass on every Sunday at a Catholic church, may not find a church in a country which is not predominantly Catholic. So, he would not be able to practice his religious duties while he is travelling in such a country.
OP fahadbd 25 / 56 5  
Sep 21, 2013   #5
Thank you all
especially pahan, has presented a good example,


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