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The housing was the most significant sector of all surveyed countries expenditures


andika08 81 / 80 16  
Nov 11, 2016   #1
A breakdown of the information about the proportion of expenditures five different basic needs in several developed countries in 2009 measured by percentage is illustrated in the bar chart. Overall, housing was by far the most significant sector of all country's expenditures. Also, USA proportions was by far the highest number in housing.

USA far dominated the proportion of housing and health care at 26% and 7%. This was followed by Canada in levels of Transportation and Clothing in 2009. Moreover, Japan levels was lead in the refreshment sector at 23% than others. Unsurprisingly, both Canada and Japan proportions spent on same budget in Health Care.

Turning to the another diverge proportion, USA levels experienced the lowest of number at 14% and 4% in Food and Clothing. As well, each Canada proportions stayed at lower rate in housing, similarity with Japan numbers in transportation. Interestingly, United Kingdom people not much spent on their funding in Health care sector.




debby17 8 / 20 5  
Nov 11, 2016   #2
Hi there.. Your writing is great but there is a small correction from me to make it better.

... health care at 26% and 7% (respectively )
... 14% and 4% in Food and Clothing (respectively )

Thanks


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