Dear Friends,
I am new here and today I would like to need your adjustment for my writing as following topic:
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measures are requried.
Exercise has become daily important activites in modern socicety. People aim to maintain a healthy habitas to live and work better. The rise of fitness centers, sport facilities have been creating more opporturnities for us to accomplished those tasks. In my point of view, to have fully positive affect to our health, besides bulding more sport facilities, having a reasonalbe nutrition regimen and reducing bad habbits, such as smoking, need to be taken in to account.
The majority of people concur that inncreasing sport facilities and equipments play an important role in the campaign of enhancing health in soicety. A strong soicety containts healthy individuals. Upon this rationale, goverments are putting more effort in this task such as building green park which is convenient for jogging and basics execerise. Further more, nowadays, in most of the designs for appartment blocks, sporty facilities such as playground for kids, swimming pool and gymclub are required from goverment as a common standard of a morden city.
In a different perspective, researchers has proove that, an effective regimen of nutrition also affects in our health. Fast food industry has booming over decades, resulting in the increasing of illness related to obese. Obese people are commonly diagnosed as diabete patients and other deadly symptom related to heart. A reasonable diet with more vegetables and less lipid and calories is helpful as well as nourishing for our heart.
And yet bad habbits influent our life style and one of the most stringing is smoking. Most of people are aware with diseases associated with smoking, typically cancer. Smoking causes cancer not only smoker themself but also second hand smokers. Many countried has strictly applied various menthod to reduce smoking such as impose high tax or purnishment of smoking in public such as Singapore.
In conclusion, health is valuable of each individual. And in order to maintain and improve our health, we need to use diversified menthod to be in optimum condition.And I strongly believe that with that combination we will prolong our life.
I am new here and today I would like to need your adjustment for my writing as following topic:
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measures are requried.
Exercise has become daily important activites in modern socicety. People aim to maintain a healthy habitas to live and work better. The rise of fitness centers, sport facilities have been creating more opporturnities for us to accomplished those tasks. In my point of view, to have fully positive affect to our health, besides bulding more sport facilities, having a reasonalbe nutrition regimen and reducing bad habbits, such as smoking, need to be taken in to account.
The majority of people concur that inncreasing sport facilities and equipments play an important role in the campaign of enhancing health in soicety. A strong soicety containts healthy individuals. Upon this rationale, goverments are putting more effort in this task such as building green park which is convenient for jogging and basics execerise. Further more, nowadays, in most of the designs for appartment blocks, sporty facilities such as playground for kids, swimming pool and gymclub are required from goverment as a common standard of a morden city.
In a different perspective, researchers has proove that, an effective regimen of nutrition also affects in our health. Fast food industry has booming over decades, resulting in the increasing of illness related to obese. Obese people are commonly diagnosed as diabete patients and other deadly symptom related to heart. A reasonable diet with more vegetables and less lipid and calories is helpful as well as nourishing for our heart.
And yet bad habbits influent our life style and one of the most stringing is smoking. Most of people are aware with diseases associated with smoking, typically cancer. Smoking causes cancer not only smoker themself but also second hand smokers. Many countried has strictly applied various menthod to reduce smoking such as impose high tax or purnishment of smoking in public such as Singapore.
In conclusion, health is valuable of each individual. And in order to maintain and improve our health, we need to use diversified menthod to be in optimum condition.And I strongly believe that with that combination we will prolong our life.