IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Essay on influence of social media on today's youth in career development.

How is social media influencing the career development of today's youth, and what opportunities and challenges does it present in shaping their professional paths?

Nowadays on today's youth, social media has heavy impact on their career developments. New opportunities and obstacles are coming up because of social media and it will shape their professional paths efficiently. This essay will explain the influence of social media on today's youth and the presence of opportunities and obstacles in shaping their professional routes.

For the above question, is the first paragraph appropriate?

No. It is not appropriate because it does not contain any information that properly highlights how the body of paragraphs will be presented. There is also a lack of clarity in your prompt restatement. I will not write the whole essay for you so do not expect that I will correct your mistakes part by part. I prefer to give advice to students based on the completed work. Not just one paragraph. However, I will give you a freebie and show you how the paragraph could be written.

Social media is considered to be a strong influence on the advancement of the professional ambitions of today's generation. However, the influence presents challenges such as finding one's identity in the world of social media platforms and overcoming the challenges that the overcrowded world poses in terms of developing their career targets, goals, and ambitions.