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Information about the level of education among Bulgarians who chose to live in another country


Linda91 30 / 40 3  
Feb 23, 2016   #1
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The bar chart provides information about the grade of education which is elected by Bulgarian people who desire to go and stay in another country in some years, 2002, 2006, and 2008, respectively. At first glance it is evident that, most of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and lived in another country was in secondary education level which was the highest level in every year than another level of education, higher education and primary and lower education.

With regards to secondary education, the figure for people with that level stood at 65% in 2002, and it was a peak among 3 years. Afterwards, this category declined minimally at least 4%, which was followed a small fall to 59% in the next year.

Turning to other levels, the figure for people with primary and lower education rose each year. In 2002, it was stood at 18%, and then showed an upward trend in other years, 19% in 2006. Subsequently, the figure peak at 32% in 2008. Next, another category was people with higher education. The figure for people with higher education stood at 17% in 2002, and then rose minimally to 20% in 2006, which was followed a significant drop to 9% in 2008.




justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Feb 23, 2016   #2
- elected by Bulgarianspeople
- in some years,for the following years,
- At firsta glance
- most of Bulgarianspeople
- go and lived in another
- than anotherthe other level of education,
- higher education and, primary and lower education.

- with thatthis level stood at
- 65% in 2002, and it wasa peakhas peaked among 3 years.
- Afterwards, tT his category
- declined minimallyto at least 4%,

There you have it Linda, the corrections I made is focused on the word form and usage of the words in your sentences that
makes up your essay. What I suggest is that you try to play with words and avoid using the same words through out the essay.

I hope this helped!


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