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Some informations we get from the map of island, before and after construction of travel facilities


BAMS14 18 / 29  
Sep 18, 2016   #1
Writing task ONE maps of island before and after constructions

From the pictures we can see map of island before and after contsuction of traveler facilities. Generally the island before builded there were no building and amenities while after builded there are any facilities such as ships, restaurant, accoodations and pier. The map shows although the island was builded, environtment still perserved.

In the picture one we could seen the island before constructed there were facilities, only beach, sea, and field with trees, the environtment still natural. On the other side island after builded there are any facilities. Those are one food shop and one reception between accomodations, the right side of island we can see nine accomadions while on the left side there are six accomaditons. The map also prsent information about vehicle track which conecting between pier, reception and restaurant and also there are footpath which linking accomodation each other. Not only above, but there are some facilities around the island such as one beach, two ships and a pier.



PJmustbebetter 6 / 8  
Sep 18, 2016   #2
I just want to comment about this:

... the island was builded, environt ment still perserved.

How can you suppose that environment still preserved? as far as I am concerned that we cannot make interpret data beyond the given question/prompt.

and please be careful toward your words because you had typed some mistakes. They must be: preserved, environment, accommodation.

thankyou


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