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International travel agencies are going to reduce their fees for people. Discuss advantages and dis.


anthonynguyen 3 / 4  
Oct 15, 2014   #1
I have little writting skill. Hope help me.thansks for all.
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In this tough economic market, the variety of people are struggling with life due to the high inflation. Therefore, it is not allow them to spend much money on vacation. As we know traveler love low paid hotels and rooms for rent because they want to spend money for discover the place they came. To solve this issue, a great number of international travel agencies cut down their fee for customers and with that strategy, the companies are able to catch some benefits in short run and damages in long run also.

About the advantages, they are explicitly to see due to the purpose of this strategy, which try to attract customers as much as possible. Furthermore, the main purpose of strategy is brand name maintenance. When the cost for a ticket downs, it obviously attract the customers and in the long time, people's mindset will be set up that this travel company have a good reputation due to a huge number of customers per year. Subsequently, the travel companies just need to keep the strategy and wait for the recovery of economy.

Apart from the advantage, implicit risks are waiting them. Firstly, the strategy mainly reduce the cost for customer which means the travel agencies are forced to pick the cheap hotels, restaurants and lessen their profit .Some agencies accept to run business without profit and others run with small profit. If they are not able to predict when the economy will revive, they will get loss because they are trading off between the time, which is may not profitable, for the reputation in future.

In short, everything has both sides; therefore we need to consider which does outweigh. In my opinion, the strategy is suitable for now tough circumstance.

AlinaSkripets 11 / 41 5  
Oct 15, 2014   #2
In this tough economic market, the variety of people are struggling to get by due to the high inflation rates . Therefore, they cannot afford to spend much money on vacation. As we know travelers love low price hotels and rooms for rent because once a people travel they want to spend money on discovering the place they came to see . To solve this issue, a great number of international travel agencies cut down their fee for customers. Employing this strategy, the companies are able to gain some benefits in short run yet making damages in long run.

I'll come back later and go on editing if these corrections seem useful to you :)
OP anthonynguyen 3 / 4  
Oct 15, 2014   #3
oh.i made almost the basic mistakes.thasnks for ủr comment and i hope to get more comments from u.
Vns9x 102 / 236 16  
Oct 17, 2014   #4
Do not utilize,, in my opinion,, in conclusion. In fact, use it in introduction instead. Moreover, try to work on your organization.


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