International travelers landing in the UK - Ielts Writing Task 1: Line graph

The given chart compares the figures for international travelers landing in the UK with various intentions from 1989 to 2009
Obviously, whatever the purposes were, the number of foreign arrivals to the UK consistently rose throughout the period examined.
Even though starting at a higher point with about 5.5 million visitors, business travelers hit a low and met the proportion of people visiting friends or relatives, with 4 million visitor arrivals in 1994. From that time to 1999, all three groups witnessed an upward trend. Notably, inbound tourist arrivals with the intention of recreation reached a peak of approximately 10 million.
Throughout the period of 5 years from 1999 to 2004, while the amount of visitors coming for leisure purposes underwent a dramatic fall, the opposite was true for people going on visiting acquaintances trips, which was almost twofold. On the contrary, the trends of these groups were reversed in the next 5 years. Meanwhile, the remaining group leveled out at around the number of 7 million.

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The summary overview should have at least 3 sentences in it. It should restate the type of image, measurement reference, and the series of information listed. That is how a proper and well scoring summary overview is presented. The trending statement can be the 4th sentence if you wish. Writing it as a stand alone sentence is only meant to help you ensure that you write all the required elements. It does not mean the trending statement is always written separately. Do not get used to that practice.


This is highly disrespectful to your reader. You should never talk down nor condescend to your reader. Always imply a respectful and academic tone in your writing. You could receive GRA deductions because of this phrase.

The essay will receive a failing score even though you wrote more than 150 words. That is because your sentence formation and development skills show that you are not capable of writing proper simple, compound, and complex sentences. You are using run on sentences in all presentation sections, limited to 2 sentences per presentation. The proper paragraph will always have 3-5 sentences in it. Do not compress information into 1 sentence. Never use 2 ideas in one sentence. Always use 1 idea per sentence as is the rule of thumb for English writing.