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You don't need to use 'Lazy expression.' This belongs more to oral communication
any subjects that we want to know and learn about in any time.
You don't need to use 'Vague language.' This communicates too much informality.
508 words... did you finish it within 30 minutes?
If it is not, then you better concentrate more on answering the task on time rather than lengthening your essay.Do you write 5 paragraphs? Yes. You write one introduction, three bodies, and one conclusion. In the bodies, you develop ideas by writing two content paragraphs arguing for and one against. This can help you write more words, but
some students, that I see, put grandiose ideas, by writing too many words. Also, I see there is an undeveloped conclusion or introductionTo justify what I'm saying, let's have a look at the Intro:There is a huge amount of information on the internet and this has both advantages and disadvantages. Taking into account these two aspects, when it comes to the issue of the internet and its informationThe Internet has allowed some people to share information in minutes. While others believe that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information while , some otherspeople think that access tooso much information creates problems. However, I believe the Internet would have have more merits in contrast to having several demeritsthe statement that the internet provides people with a great deal of valuable information carries more weight than the latter for following reasons and explanations:
the conclusion:"A coin has two sides"
You'd better rewrite this expression. What I see is that many students think
the memorization of the perfect answer is much more acceptable. Therefore they use it every time. And to tell you the truth it doesn't impress the readers at all because it is too common for words .
Well then, let's go on the 4 paragraphs.
With a 4-paragraph essay, you are easy to develop your paragraph properly, one content paragraph for, and one againts. This is good for coherence and cohesion between the sentence-paragraph-essay development, and for which in the five paragraphs this is weak.
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