Introduction "Impact of Globalization"

Global warming issue

Global warming is a global issue, that has sparked intense debate between the scientists and multinational specialists about the reality of climate change and whether or not these climate changes are brought about by human activity. While multinational specialists argue that global warming is a natural phenomenon and human activity has no role in accelerating the pace of climate change, scientists have come out as winners by presenting facts based on historical trends. Scientist claim that the amount of green house gas emission increased sharply in the post industrialization era. They have gone a step further by demonstrating the adverse impacts of global warming on the planet. Climate change has made the arctic and Antarctica ocean to meltdown, compounding the problems for the environment and habitat. It poses great danger to the survival of many aquatic species, islands and may become the cause of water-borne diseases in future. Therefore collective responsibilities are required to save the planet from warming inordinately. Some of these include: reduction in green house gas emission and moving towards a sustainable clean energy including solar, wind and geothermal energy.

@loveofenglish As I read this introduction, I found it wanting in terms of specific, introductory information. The first missing information would be the definition of global warming. A simple explanation of what it represents, in terms that non-scientific people can understand can help build the foundation of your research. The second aspect you need to present are the two sides of the discussion. You have described what global warming means to people who believe in it. but you did not define what it means to those who oppose this school of thought. Finally, what is the point of your essay? What is your thesis or motivation for this research / essay. What will you be discussing and offering proof of? That global warming exists? If so then explain what makes your presentation different from all the other papers that prove the phenomenon exists. What aspect of the research will you be presenting that has had little light shed on it in the past? What will be the basis of your information? Make your reader care about what you are writing instead of just sounding like a textbook copy of the global warming discussion.