Please be attention with your introduction because your first paragraph is too long.
You can divide into introduction and general
example
Junk food or Fast food as it often reffered to become more popular and common in our society nowadays.People, especially children are the most vulnerable group affected by the accessibility of the junk food because of the numerous snack machines they have in educational institutions.
that's could be your intro and the following statement could be body para 1
Day by day they become more enhanced and easied the process of producing, thus increasing the number of consumers. This alarming fact indicates polluted environment. Fast food initially seemed like the best solution for profitable business brought up to consumering society and contaminated environment as the result. Cups, plates and others that have been produced cheaply so that it can be thrown away after it has been used. Tinned and overpackaged food causing damages or what is worse cause dangerous viruses jeoparadizing people`s health.
Then you should discuss this essay, follow the instructions.
"It is noticeable that fast food consumption has increased substaintially during the last 10 years. discuss it`s impact on environment and health."
Good Luck for your next essays :)