Hi ... Desy,
let me give you some suggestions,
The advanced of technology influences ...
Regarding to this these reasons, ... (see spelling) the disadvantages you may need one verb again. Analyzing about this will be written in this essay.
... age on children encourages them expert ...
they can use many applications such as ...
While when they are able to use hardware, it easily is easy for these children ...
like printer without need needing a help from adult
their skillfull to surf the Internet will increase tremendeously (see spelling) because they often to spend much time for on computers and gadget, .....
there is a consequences affect by (...), but the benefits biggest are bigger than the drawbacks.
... digital equipment stimulates their talent (...) and surfing the internet better, (...) outweight (you may need a verb and see spelling) the demerits.
Hope this helps,
keep cheers,
Moh. Jawahir