I'm doing a peer review for this lady but ugh, I don't know how to make it look better.
I got married at the age of sixteen, and ever since I was a child I had this dream to become a lawyer, but I met this guy who's name was Juan and in, he also had his goals. I fell in love, so I married him when he was 18. When we graduated from high school, we both had the opportunity to reach our goals in different ways. He was selected to move to Spain, and I was classified into another education plan. After we analyzed the advantage and the dis advantages, we both agreed that the best way to follow his dream first because he wanted to support his family. Also, we agreed that at the time he reached his goals, that I will be able to follow my dream. However, we knew that we wanted to be together, so we followed his bright opportunity to go and receive his bright opportunity to go and receive his degrees in math and air defense logistics in Spain, Israel and the U.S.
I got married at the age of sixteen, and ever since I was a child I had this dream to become a lawyer, but I met this guy who's name was Juan and in, he also had his goals. I fell in love, so I married him when he was 18. When we graduated from high school, we both had the opportunity to reach our goals in different ways. He was selected to move to Spain, and I was classified into another education plan. After we analyzed the advantage and the dis advantages, we both agreed that the best way to follow his dream first because he wanted to support his family. Also, we agreed that at the time he reached his goals, that I will be able to follow my dream. However, we knew that we wanted to be together, so we followed his bright opportunity to go and receive his bright opportunity to go and receive his degrees in math and air defense logistics in Spain, Israel and the U.S.
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