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To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal and study in a comfortable atmosphere

Anfalia 40 / 56 23  
Dec 13, 2014   #1
To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at school. How true is this statement?
Whose responsibility is it to provide food for school children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Good health is the key for a happy life. For this reason, eating a healthy diet helps children stay alert during class. While it is true, school food policies help schools to provide children with foods and drinks that are part of a healthy diet.

Schoolchildren spend almost a half of their time and consume at least half of their meals each day at school. United States Department of Agriculture requires the national school lunch and breakfast program with healthy and nutritious meals to millions of American children every day. These excellent balanced diet programs encourage children easily to focus on their learning at class. As a result, one of children's successful learning depends on their food consumption at school.

On the other hand, several aspects may affect the effectiveness of children's learning. Firstly, a comfortable atmosphere encourages the development of children's brain storming so as that they study seriously. To exemplify, several high schools in Indonesia provide air conditioner in every class. It is undeniable that students more particularly focus on learning because they do not need to be worried through the extreme hot weather. Secondly, students will learn successfully when they have a competent teacher who explains lesson briefly. Thirdly, students need friendly friends to create their learning spirit. This presently comes from the atmosphere which enables to build an environment conducive to learning.

Another point to discuss this opinion is support from educational stakeholders and health authorities. They are supposed to make schools healthier places to learn by providing quality food and teaching children about the importance of nutrition and embracing a healthy active lifestyle. As an obvious example, the first lady has challenged America to put 6,000 salad bars into schools with fresh vegetables and fruit. Indeed, this is an easy step toward a healthier nation.

Ultimately, a healthy meal and comfortable atmosphere are essential for schoolchildren to create the effectiveness of learning at class. Where possible, they should also get a balanced nutrition diet from their parents, which is the vital factor for children to be focus on their learning.
somasalims 15 / 27 5  
Dec 16, 2014   #2
Let me try to correct the last paragraph, I think the conclusion is not clear. It should revert to the thesis statement in the first paragraph. Furthermore, you also need to add suggestion.

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