Hellooo,
This writing is good. However, you still have problems with grammatical mechanics.
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a my faced problem
opportunity to riseraise our educational level
improvement of ability, with regardingto cooperation
You also need to pay attention to lower and upper-case letters, here are they:
Firstly, The distinguishing
should the
Moreover, This gives us opportunity to rise our educational level to an exited degree. knowledge may be thereby better improved and strengthened.
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