please, Inspect my essay. it is for TOEFL :))
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Do you learn better by yourself or with a teacher ?
Every person learn in their own manner which they think that is most expedient to them. As for the learning by yourself, it has some certain profit. It gives you a chance to concentrate on what you learn cause there is no one who distracts your attention in presence of you, and your learning becomes more profound. In addition, the learning with a teacher makes us bear more burdens of studies cause they assign us homework, Nevertheless, I prefer to learn with a teacher rather than learn by myself.
Firstly, The distinguishing fact of the learning with a teacher is that you can ask about problems related your studies. In other words, when we encounter difficulty in our study which we can not make out, that asking the difficulty from our teacher is propitious way for us to solve it instantly. In addition , professors and teachers have much experience and knowledge, and are so dextrous with letting students understand their study. They know something which are not incorporated in such materials as books and webpages. Hence I, in my class, often communicate with my teacher to find a coordinated answer to a my faced problem, and my classmates are so accustomed to communicating with the teacher.
Secondly, in my mind, the learning with a teacher is more efficient than by myself. We can accomplish our assignments with little help of a teacher within less time than do it by ourself. Furthermore, the teachers play important role in leading us to right direction. Moreover, This gives us opportunity to rise our educational level to an exited degree. knowledge may be thereby better improved and strengthened.
Finally, of course ,being without a teacher has shortcomings. Notable one of the shortcomings is that if someone faced so complicated confusion in his study and his many endeavors on making out it were miscarried, this might be ended in disappointment. I think that for one who depends on only himself in learning, his improvement of ability, with regard to cooperation and express his opinion, is unpromising. Hence I support this point that the learning with a teacher is better.
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This writing is good. However, you still have problems with grammatical mechanics.
Here are they:
They know something which
areIS a my faced problem
riseraise our educational level
improvement of ability
, with regarding to cooperation
You also need to pay attention to lower and upper-case letters, here are they:
Firstly, The distinguishing
Moreover, This gives us opportunity to rise our educational level to an exited degree. knowledge may be thereby better improved and strengthened.
should this and Knowledge
Every person learn in their own manner
person learns / people learn
Every person learn in their own manner which they think that is mostexpedient to them.
... well, do not have the habit of replacing words with synonyms if you do not have a good understanding of their use. "Expedient" is not an appropriate word to pass the message you want . It is very dangerous to use synonyms if you are not sure of their usage as they can give a total different meaning to your idea.Every person leans in their own way which they think the best and quickest approach for them.