hi Zihni, let me to rewrite your intro.
Nowadays, the common types of mass media more likely to show the lifestyle of public figures to entertain the viewers. While it is acceptable, i strongly believe that media, as a communication connector between government and citizen, should report much more about everything happened to ordinary people in the society.
The common type of amusement which a media entertainment has generally contained about lifestyles of famous people.
the word which for noun clause is followed by verb.
Group of people who say 'yes' in the case of media should entertain so they must show something that can produce the viewers happy, a head of life style some people in west Indonesia, for example way of Syahrini's life which tell viewers about shopping, and traveling to tourism area.
maybe you should add article after group of people and be careful about subject and verb agreement.
people still need
s help. We can see in some places in Indonesia which are consist of different condition in each island. Indonesia has differents condition. Furthermore, some people life in the poor condition for example in Grogos island, East Maluku, which is the native citizen life without an electricity.