In 1962, there was a limited public transport in the surveyed villages.

The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present)
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates Meadowside village and Fonton was constructed in three periods consist of 1962, 1985, and present. Over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes.

In 1962, there was a lot of empty space and just the road was through Meadowside village, while only the railway line passing Fonton. The following period, Meadowside village was had major changes such as housing state, leisure complex, and super store were contructed in this area. Besides, roads was more bigger than before and it also linked between Fonton and Meadowside village. At the same time both areas was expanding.

Next, at the present time, the most noticeable addition is Forton and Meadowside were merge to be a one area. Besides, village was change into suburb area in Meadowside. Then there are three additional places consist of Hotel, Station, dan Business park.

Following this, business park was developed in front of artery road and across of station. Afterwards, station can reach from Fonton with train and hotel is opposite the station.

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Hi Riandi.
I have read this closely. These are my vantage points about your writing. Please, meet my notes and deal with them.

The map illustrates Meadowside village and Fonton was(Here is a conjunction + be "WHICH WERE", but I omit that in order to show comprehension of the complex sentence) constructed in three periods; consist of 1962, 1985, and present. Over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes.(Your overview is less stronger because it cannot cover all periods)

In 1962, there was a lot of PLENTY OF (Don't ever locate a lot in the formal writing) empty space and just the road was through Meadowside (...) the railway line passing PASSED Fonton. The following THAT period, Meadowside village was had major changes (...), and super store werecontructed CONSTRUCTED in this area. Besides APART FROM THAT, THE roads was WERE more bigger than before...

..., both areas was WERE expanding.

..., the most noticeable addition is THAT Forton and Meadowside were mergeD to be aN one area. Besides ON THE ONE HAND, THE village was changeD into ...

Then, there are three additional places WHICH consist of ...

... developed in front of THE artery road and across of THE station. Afterwards,THE station (...) with A train, and THE hotel is opposite the station.

Notes: I am going to describe my thoughts. You are supposed to review these below:
1. Make sure what you write is what you mind so that readers do not get misconceptions.
2. Verb Agreement
3. Keep in your mind that each sentence only has one main verb.
4. One of your major mistakes is misspelling. You should reread more times before you upload your writing so that you can minimize errors.
5. Harness linking words properly.
6. Use of the articles (A/An/The)
7. You have to make the overview covering general trend of all figures.

Mr. Riandi.
Please, you review those so that you do not fall the same mistakes.
I believe you can show the better progress if you wanna provide more time to practice again and again.
As many as you practice, you will cut the time to be master in this skill.
Keep Spirit
GOOD LUCK
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