The line chart shows the amount of income from movie theatre ticket and DVD sales in The USA

film industry profits

The shown line chart demonstrates how much money the film industry made by selling cinema tickets and DVDs in the USA and abroad between 2001 and 2010.

It can be seen clearly that the income from international cinema tickets and DVDs had a very stable growth while the income in the USA didn't change much.

The earnings of the film industry abroad from the two sources were very similar in terms of growth. In 2001, International DVD sales were just around 11 billion whereas the revenue from cinema tickets was approximately 20 billion dollars. They (DVD and cinema ticket sales) rose by over 8 billion dollars by 2004, respectively, to 18,5 billion and 28 billion. After that, they reduced by 2 billion dollars in 2005 but then gradually increased by almost the same earnings. In 2010, the income from international DVD and cinema ticket sales was 23 billion and 33 billion dollars, respectively.

On the other hand, we couldn't see any significant changes in the revenue the film industry in the USA got. In 2001, income from North American DVD sales had an impressive growth to 25 billion dollars in 2004 but then reduced gradually to 18 billion dollars in 2010. The most special is the earnings from cinema tickets. From 2001 to 2010, they just fluctuated around 10 billion dollars.

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