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Line Graph Task-Compare the rate of inflation and GDP in VietNam between 1999 and 2011



suocquy 1 / 1  
Sep 27, 2021   #1

The Graph compares the rate of inflation and GDP in VietNam over the 12-years course from 1999 to 2011.


Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend in the rate of inflation, while the GDP did not change too much during the given period. Also, both figures met at the same record in 2005.

At the beginning of the period, the figures for both inflation and GDP were nearly equal, at around 5%. After that, the rate of inflation dropped by 5% while the GDP rose slightly to 7% in 2000. Over the next 6 years, the figure of inflation experienced a sharp increase and reach a peak of 25% in 2008. Meanwhile, there was a slight grew in the rate of GDP between 2001 and 2007 before dipping down to nearly 5%.

The rate of inflation thereafter underwent a sharp drop to 7%, then suddenly increase again to 19% in 2011. The figure of GDP, meanwhile, had fluctuations in this stage, in 2010 the percentage increased but immediately fell to 6% in 2011.


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Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15384  
Sep 28, 2021   #2
Do not capitalize any sentence in the summary overview except for the first letter of every new sentence. Do not shout at the examiner. Use the correct variety of upper and lower case letters at all times. Keep the academic tone consistent throughout.

For the summary overview, there needs to be a clear identification of the 2 line representations. As these are color coded lines, the proper differentiation in the line descriptions, and correct line type identification based on the color code adds to the clear restatement of the image data.

grew

Word choice error. The word used should have been growth as it is a past form reference.

had fluctuations in this stage,

Are you referring to a different time frame from the one mentioned in the next line? Review your presentation for reference clarity after completing the draft. Revise as needed.
OP suocquy 1 / 1  
Oct 1, 2021   #3
@Holt
thanks for ur advice! But what you mean when i shout at the examiner? I still dont get it!!


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