There has a lot of changes in the town or city where you are living

[b]Topic : there has a lot of changes in the town or city where you are living . Describe two or three changes and state your opinion about the changes .

Quang binh is poor area in the North Central Coast. In recent decade, The development polices of the state are right, making from a poor area to a developing possibility area and having a lot of changes .

The first, communication systems are more and more expanding, upgrading to take advantage of connect to other areas and neighboring countries such as Laos , Cambodia ... Moreover, the roads in the countryside also rebuilt more nicely so the business of citizenry is convenience.

The second, many high buildings have been built, means that investors would like to invest here so the demand expands and builds houses to have local.

The third, the travelling and entertainingly places have been discovered and widened so there are many tourists who come to holiday and visit.
Inclusion, My native land has been changing all of field and my native land hopes more and more developing.

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I suppose it should be in plural form


you lack of an object and need to paraphrase the repeated words
These are my opinions so far.

Thank you for helping !
And, what do you think about my topic ?

Quang binh is a poor areatownship (or village .... you need to specify) in the North Central Coast. In recent decade, Thethe development polices of the state are right, making from a poor area to a developing possibility area and having a lot of changes .helped turn Quang binh into a more developed city.

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