With the society developingBoth these paras should go into one introductory para. Your first paragraph, the introductory para, should contain a brief introduction to the topic, a clear statement on what your opinion on the argument, and if possible a brief introduction about your reasons to have that opinion. You have all those important features of an introduction in these two paras. So, make it one paragraph :)
In my opinions, I realty support this argument..
With the society developing, the majority of women have a full time job, instead of them
staying at home to
do the housework and take care of the
on this situation, some experts point out that the husband should share
evenly the job at home with the wife.the household activities evenly with his wife in order to have a harmonious family life. :)
basic means fundamental, essential, prime etc. e.g. Food, cloth and shelter are the three basic human needs;base/basis - meaning the foundation upon which something rests.
e.g. 1) Army base , .... here the word base acts as a noun
2)These are my conclusions based on my experience... here it acts as a verb
3) I believe they recruit people on gender basis
I realty support.... I really support
The most critical reason is man has physical advantage, which is stronger and energetic, even taller than woman.
--------------- say this a bit differently'The most important reason is that a man is physically stronger than a woman in nature.---------- don't talk about the height.... of course there are women who are taller than men :D