WT1: The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The diagrams illustrate how the village of Ryemouth has changed since 1995.

Overall, the town has undergone a number of changes, the most important of which are the disappearance of green area, the increase of accommodations and the development of amenities catering for sports and food and drink demands.

The north-west of the town saw a number of changes, with the expansion of the housing area on both sides of the road and on the west side of the existing residential area, with a new pathway leading off the main road. The agricultural land in the north-east of the town was replaced by a golf course, along with the demolition of the forest park to be changed into two tennis courts.

In the south-west of the town, the chain of stores was converted into a restaurant complex, which was accompanied by the replacement of fish market with apartments on the opposite side of the road. To the south of the new apartment area, the fishing port has been removed. Finally, the hotel and cafe in the south-east of the town remained, with a new car park has been constructed for guests to settle their vehicles.

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This is an incorrect image identifier. The presentation is not composed of diagrams. These are illustrative maps, or simply put, location maps of the area.

In terms of your description of the differening images, I found myself confused while reading the related paragraphs. You need to be more precise in your discussion. That means, indicate the year at the start of the paragraph to allow your reader to easily differentiate between the two presentation. It is important that you do this so that the reader will not be confused by the presentation. Such confusing statements could end up giving you a failing GRA score.

Remember that clarity is the name of the game. So you have to be sure that the report you are writing will be be understandable on the first read to the examiner.