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The maps show some development that have been made in the Lakeside from 2000 to 2009



Anna94 47 / 50  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
The changes in Lakeside in 2000 and 2009.

The maps show some improvements that have been done in the Lakeside from 2000 to 2009. Overall, there were some changes in the city, which industrial complex became larger after it was extended by dragging people's living places.

Firstly, public services experienced improvements in three places. Derelic warehouse that located in the right of residential area in 2005, were constructed to be car park nine years later. Then in front of that location, there was old town, which changed into offices and university. Afterwards, in the east of the city, lake was minimized to be pond.

Furthermore, entertainment center and business place were improved to be remarkable and famous area in 2009. Art center was changed to be cinema, which it stood at the west of the city. Then, housing in the left of the river was removed to build shopping center. One of the citizen estates at the right of the river was sold in the company to make a big industrial complex that unites in the small industrial in the south east of the city. 177w


  • The changes in Lakeside


Wilyaftika23 46 / 31  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
... of residential area in 2005 (2000), were(was) constructed to be car ...
..., which (was) changed into ...

just a little mistakes :)
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