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Qustion; Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the present time, preparing food is more easier than in the former time. With modern technological were built for improving to the way of ones food preparation. These modern techonlogical of cooking have higher property than the old appliances. That means, the modern cooking appliances have a methods are used much easily and more convenient than the old appliances that were used by former time.
To begin with, the modern appliances of cooking have contributed to help people to perpare their food easily and quickly. Having also a lots of capabilities such as more convenient, safety and efficient. One of is the microwave ovens which are often used for preparing fast food due to is easily and quickly methods to prepare their food. Also, they have the botton of control oven heate and can convert the temparature of their cooking require for avioding the food became indible. As a reults, people can easily their cooking without worrying about indible food.
In addition, nowadays, there are many food sections which are easily purchase and more convenient to prepare thier food such as instant food and precooked. For examle, people who have no time much can buy an instant noodle covered with a disposable small cup which devours in just three minutes instead of doing to their cooking prepareation. Besides, there are many kind of precooked can easily purchase in the stores or supermarket, such as hams,bacons, chicken recipes and pies. These precooked can be made into a microwave soon they wanted and also keep for a long time than kind of food fresh meals or fishes.
Moreover, there are some ingredients which helps to prepare their food is more easily. For example, somtimes, when I wanted to a spagetty in the hurry time, I would use a prepackaged ingredients instead of cutting tomatoes or any spices by myself. I found that is easy way and still the original taste of my cooking. As a results, I spending for a short time and their tastes do not much more different than doing the original spagetty myself.
However, this is just only my opinon and experiences. There are some aspects was agrued that buying instant food, precooked or prepackaged ingredients will affect thier unhealthly which become catalysts of obesity later. Despits,it is a difficult denies that these modern methods and appliances have helped most of people can more easily prepare thier food and more efficiency for their busy lives than in former time.
Qustion; Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the present time, preparing food is more easier than in the former time. With modern technological were built for improving to the way of ones food preparation. These modern techonlogical of cooking have higher property than the old appliances. That means, the modern cooking appliances have a methods are used much easily and more convenient than the old appliances that were used by former time.
To begin with, the modern appliances of cooking have contributed to help people to perpare their food easily and quickly. Having also a lots of capabilities such as more convenient, safety and efficient. One of is the microwave ovens which are often used for preparing fast food due to is easily and quickly methods to prepare their food. Also, they have the botton of control oven heate and can convert the temparature of their cooking require for avioding the food became indible. As a reults, people can easily their cooking without worrying about indible food.
In addition, nowadays, there are many food sections which are easily purchase and more convenient to prepare thier food such as instant food and precooked. For examle, people who have no time much can buy an instant noodle covered with a disposable small cup which devours in just three minutes instead of doing to their cooking prepareation. Besides, there are many kind of precooked can easily purchase in the stores or supermarket, such as hams,bacons, chicken recipes and pies. These precooked can be made into a microwave soon they wanted and also keep for a long time than kind of food fresh meals or fishes.
Moreover, there are some ingredients which helps to prepare their food is more easily. For example, somtimes, when I wanted to a spagetty in the hurry time, I would use a prepackaged ingredients instead of cutting tomatoes or any spices by myself. I found that is easy way and still the original taste of my cooking. As a results, I spending for a short time and their tastes do not much more different than doing the original spagetty myself.
However, this is just only my opinon and experiences. There are some aspects was agrued that buying instant food, precooked or prepackaged ingredients will affect thier unhealthly which become catalysts of obesity later. Despits,it is a difficult denies that these modern methods and appliances have helped most of people can more easily prepare thier food and more efficiency for their busy lives than in former time.