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IELTS task 2:
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As has been often reported, many eminent sportspersons are capable of acquiring huge amount of income. Such financial benefits have resulted in gap differences among professionals. This can then lead to controversial issue surrounding inequality. Although this seems to be problematic, there are more beneficial effects.
Not surprisingly, there has been recently heat debate related issue about high disproportionate of annual income, among high profile jobs. Andy Rodrick, for instance, who is the world's famous tennis player can afford on average millions dollar each year which is considerably more substantial than other jobs such as doctors or lawyers. It then comes to a question why there is such a large difference if our world based on the same fundamental doctrine of equality. In addition, other professionals are also essential in our running community.
On the other hand, sport plays a crucial role in many ways to keep inhabitants healthy. Sports professionals are also taken into that part.They are not only a positive incentive for their followers to do physical activities, but also entertaining their fans in game competitions. These are enough to be the main reason why they, particularly successful sports professional, can afford millions dollar a year. From my point of view, these careers have also helped decrease global health budget because whenever people have an increasing trend to participate in sports, they will end up with a good health which this means medical cost reduction.
Ultimately, extremely high compensation for successful sport careers is essential not only for being people's role models but also entertaining their fans in competitions. However, this seems to cause less significant problem in terms of salary inequality.
IELTS task 2:
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As has been often reported, many eminent sportspersons are capable of acquiring huge amount of income. Such financial benefits have resulted in gap differences among professionals. This can then lead to controversial issue surrounding inequality. Although this seems to be problematic, there are more beneficial effects.
Not surprisingly, there has been recently heat debate related issue about high disproportionate of annual income, among high profile jobs. Andy Rodrick, for instance, who is the world's famous tennis player can afford on average millions dollar each year which is considerably more substantial than other jobs such as doctors or lawyers. It then comes to a question why there is such a large difference if our world based on the same fundamental doctrine of equality. In addition, other professionals are also essential in our running community.
On the other hand, sport plays a crucial role in many ways to keep inhabitants healthy. Sports professionals are also taken into that part.They are not only a positive incentive for their followers to do physical activities, but also entertaining their fans in game competitions. These are enough to be the main reason why they, particularly successful sports professional, can afford millions dollar a year. From my point of view, these careers have also helped decrease global health budget because whenever people have an increasing trend to participate in sports, they will end up with a good health which this means medical cost reduction.
Ultimately, extremely high compensation for successful sport careers is essential not only for being people's role models but also entertaining their fans in competitions. However, this seems to cause less significant problem in terms of salary inequality.
