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National Geographic to save the Animals Rhinos in Africa



Mita22 3 / 1  
Sep 14, 2016   #1
In 2010 by WWF_South Africa, worldwide bringing attention the plight of the rare animals. All five species of rhinos are threatened by poaching, and three of them are critically endangered. Especially in Vietnam, has fueled the killing of rhinos for years.

83 percent in South Africa 26,000 rhinos left in Africa, in Kruger National Park in 2013, a record 1,004 rhinos were killed said, more than 50 years ago when we brought the white rhino, population of Africa's and white rhino specie have show steady.

Alamsyah Ismail 24 / 38  
Sep 14, 2016   #2
Dear Mita
i have a few advice to your essay

population of Africa's and white rhino specie have show steady.
there is not match in pararel sentence


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