IELTS-There can be many negative effects caused by people resisting to new changes!

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

Recent years, it would seem more people counteract changes that they meet in their lives. This is issue of today's concern. From my point of view, people maybe meet adverse side effects if they have this character. This essay will analyse the negative effects of their resistance.

First of all, when people go abroad to study or work, they must adapt new culture and local people. In case they still keep their counteraction, they cannot connected with any other and learn new things from new places. Moreover, there will not a co-operation of colleagues, this could lead to fallen of ambitious career in the future.On the other hand, life is not always beautiful. Occasionally, people must modify themselves to adjust various circumstances. Conservative character may lead friends keep away from them, as a results that they face with an isolated living.

Therfore, although there are many serious consequences when people withstand making changes, there are still several solutions of action to open heart of everyone. They need to learn change management due to change is indispensable in the life nowadays. One of the ways is people could do many things flexibily depend on elements. Another course is they must go out and exchange relations, it makes them be confident and eliminate their conservation disposition.

Taking into account all the factors mentioned above, I reach the conclusion that opposing changes in the life can leads to a lot of negative effects. Actually, we still have many ways to deal with them.

In r ecent years, it wouldseems that more people counteractresist changes that they meet in their lives. This is an important issue of today's concern.

From my point of view, people maybe meet adverse side effects if they have this character.
This sounds unclear.. maybe say it like this: "In my opinion, people who resist change will suffer from the effects of their hesitation."

First of all, when people go abroad to study or work, they must adaptto a new culture and interact with local people.

In case they still keep their counteraction, they cannot connected with any other and learn new things from new places.
Maybe you could say it like this: "If they are afraid to try new things, they will never enjoy learning new things from foreign places."

Jennyflower81
Thank you so much! Do I have other mistakes? can you give me positive score

your essay is nice. Jenny has already corrected it.

I think it is a little short, isn't it? I counted the words and there are about 249.
you should write around 260-270 words, that way you can make sure you reach the word limit in the exam.

This is not a strong sentence.This gives an impression that this has begun in recent times. In my opinion, this is a general phenomenon of all times. So I suggest you to keep this idea in a more general form;

It is a known fact that people generally tend to resist change.


... this is and had been an issue of all times. So let's say differently;
In today's dynamic world where change is inevitable, this is an issue of concern.