Allow me to give you some suggestions.
solve in your sentence should be a nounwith the author is Al Gore that explains about solving the climate crisis.
Many advantages of this electronic
You are able to use "enormous" for replacing "many"
...screen, like search the location where we ...
It is really long sentence seriously, you have to divide it in 2-3 sentences.
To conclude, you have to pay attention to your sentences.
It will be better to take a look about complex sentence and conjunction.
Hope it helps you :)